Saturday, January 22, 2011

On a Whim...

As i roam about on the empty road,
I have a feeling that i have something to unload,
Maybe its a load of tears 
Or could it be the sum of my fears?


Whatever it is,
Its become to heavy like this, 
How will i be rid of this,
A fact like this is what i miss.


I look around for a familiar face,
But there is nothing familiar not even the place,
On my knees now i  ask for grace,
But i see now there's no use coz even my soul has been replaced.

This one i wrote on the impulse without caring much how it came out. It is built on a whim but it talks of everything that has not been a part of my whim.As i could wish it would have been on a whim, when things go wrong even for the calculated risks that have been taken...

2 comments:

  1. 1st verse touchy....!!!...dea..!!...u r so loaded wid fears ...so loaded wid feelings....such tht it makes u so write beatifully....

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  2. Thanks a lot dear... I guess i derive something good from my negative feelings after all,so i'm happy with that too... :)

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