This is something I wrote as an experiment to write from a different perspective,though i can't really figure how much i have been able to change...
As my life's autumn goes by
Watching as each leaf withers by
I have and will always try
To find my place beneath the sky
Memory flashes I have everyday
Some are important and some other redundant
All of them rife with promiscuity and play
Stinking with such instances,I have them abundant.
Filled with regret,am I?
"No, hell no!" I'll always say
Junk and hearts I had to play
With music as the catalyst,I had highs so I could touch the sky.
I had brothers in arms and sisters seven
When everyone faded to black,I faded into blue
I searched for my stairway to heaven
At all the hotels in California I went to
I welcomed everyone to play
Play with my soul, my life
All I wanted to do was not bow
Down to fate and end with a function to pray
Now I walk this autumn path with a knife
I want to now just end this life with one single blow.
As my life's autumn goes by
Watching as each leaf withers by
I have and will always try
To find my place beneath the sky
Memory flashes I have everyday
Some are important and some other redundant
All of them rife with promiscuity and play
Stinking with such instances,I have them abundant.
Filled with regret,am I?
"No, hell no!" I'll always say
Junk and hearts I had to play
With music as the catalyst,I had highs so I could touch the sky.
I had brothers in arms and sisters seven
When everyone faded to black,I faded into blue
I searched for my stairway to heaven
At all the hotels in California I went to
I welcomed everyone to play
Play with my soul, my life
All I wanted to do was not bow
Down to fate and end with a function to pray
Now I walk this autumn path with a knife
I want to now just end this life with one single blow.
Awesome Sanya..
ReplyDeletethe experiment remained favourable.. the write-up's possesing a different perspective.
Nice to know about the memory flashes u have..
And the Dire Strait's, Seven Sister's, Metallica's, Led Zeppelin's and Eagel's usage was extremely nice in 2nd last para.
In 3rd stanza and the last one I found the reflection of my thoughts coinciding with yours.
Nice one.. Great!!
ajax
Thank you so much for your comment... now i'm more confident about experimenting with my writing style,i still have yet to be able to get into another person's skin and write a piece... :)
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ReplyDeletejust to revise you again, as u may be already knowing it - "never get conscious about ur writing..
ReplyDeleteyou just go on and write.. u just sit n pen down.." but never stop writing..
i blindly n totally agree with this one thing once spoken out by me in a conference - "not only a writer changes the world, but only a writer changes the world"
You write good.. i m yet to finish with ur old writeups.. will do it soon. c ya.
ajax
I once said.. "Not only a writer changes the world, but only a writer changes the world"
ReplyDeleteYou write good, never stop ur this thing.
n yeah never get conscious about writing anything.. u just go n write anything. u just sit n pen down. never think how will it look or appear to others.. i wish to see your name with celeberated writers.
i m yet to do with ur older posts..
will be over with them soon..
c ya.
ajax
Thank you for the appreciation. Though it may seem so but I'm quite fearless about my writing. I have hardly ever written anything to please anyone. I write as an outlet of some spoken and unspoken feelings and thoughts.In this I'm gifted so I think its better to use it rather than waste it away in worries... Thank you for your support,it encourages me a lot.
ReplyDeleteyet again..u made me speechless..sometimes i feel lyk my soul sister is jotting down my feeling in her own beautiful way..
ReplyDeletend dis metallica kind..aah i loved it..:D
@tripti: Thanks sweetheart... <3 to my sis... ;) n mettalica is jst one of d great things tht i hv listened to... \m/
ReplyDeleteFor Whom The Bell Tolls... \m/
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